From Manuscript to Market

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Strategic Book Query Development for a First-Time Author

Narrative matters most when decisions are made quickly—and often silently. A well-crafted query ensures the right story gets noticed.

At a Glance

The Challenge

The author had completed a manuscript with strong thematic depth but struggled to distill the work into a concise, persuasive query letter. Early drafts leaned heavily on plot summary, without clearly communicating the book’s unique positioning or its relevance in the current market.

Without a compelling query, the manuscript risked being overlooked—regardless of its underlying quality.

Complexity Beneath the Surface

This wasn’t a writing problem—it was a translation problem:

• Translating long-form narrative into a one-page pitch

• Clarifying genre, audience, and comparative titles

• Preserving the author’s voice while sharpening focus

Each sentence needed to do strategic work.

The Approach

Thomas treated the query as a narrative and positioning exercise:

The Outcome

The final query letter clearly articulated the book’s concept, stakes, and market relevance in a concise, compelling format. The author gained a tool that accurately represented their work—and the confidence to approach agents with clarity and purpose.

While the context was publishing, the underlying challenge—translating complex intent for a highly selective audience—mirrors the work required in legal, academic, and corporate environments.

Client Voices

Thomas helped me see my work through a publisher’s eyes. The query didn’t just summarized my book, it positioned it.

- Christina Stenstrom